Lock it deep,
block it forever,
Poke it never,else
choke you,they will
all just in dreams.
Prisoners they take,
slaves they do make,
in your fears they live,
to you,tears they will give.
all just in dreams.
repeat them not,
heed to them never,
remembered if ever,
pretend to think not
all for your dreams.
dream,live,play but dare
you make rulers out of
your worst nightmares !
Submitted to One Shot Wednesday
I didnt have night mares before.. but offlate they seem to have found the door to my dreams too
sad to hear that π God spare you from those soon …
Excellent π Keep them coming!!
will try for sure π
laying in bed next to you must be one hell of a ride..LOL…a good, strong poem…and thanks for sharing with One Stop..cheers Pete
Oh Pete.. you gave me a naughty idea for next poem .. π
thanks for visiting and the welcome π
Thanks for stopping by and this is a wonderful write, enjoyed reading you π
thanks ! i enjoyed yours as much π
After reading the comment exchanged with Pete, the next one should be interesting. lol Like how you use the “all just in dreams” repetition. We indeed do make rulers out of our worst nightmares. Great poem.
haha .. You did add to the idea triggered by Pete’s comment π
thanks for the visit and comment π
Excellent, with a great question at the end.
pleasure to see you here again and again sir !
I’ve had few nightmares in my life, but they have lingered for decades.
I really enjoyed this – it describes the power of the dark so well.
This is to warn you off that power !! Thanks for the kind words π
love the last stanza — she we do make rulers out of our nightmares….nice read indeed..bkm
thank you for your kind words π
that last line is so truthful it’s scary!
it can be !
I love dreams – keep out of my head night mares!!!
really great visuals
thanks soo much for being part of One Shot Wednesday
my pleasure !! thank you for hosting such a great party π
Love a good nightmare now and then well done ,, oh by the way it will be interesting to see what you come up with next, referring to the comments above. It should be very interesting read.
Joanny
came by one shot Wed.
thanks for the good words Loan !! Might really have to write the one being talked of here for next week π
Scary – and good – not to let them rule
thanks !
Be the ruler of your own nightmares! ;D Great poem and wonderful atmosphere, love the scary part^^, thank for sharing=D
glad for your visit and comment π