I prefer my poetry/fiction to talk rather than myself. These days,most of my free time goes in writing and reading. There is a new style of poetry gogyohka that i am learning, apart from practising haiku daily on my twitter page : Nimue_
Here is one entry of each style :
The road
to my heart
closed down
after
you left..
The roads to my heart
opened to none but for you
broken now like me
Prompted at Sunday scribblings & One Single Impression
So very sad! Broken roads are always so sad! But do you see that delightful little winding track wandering over there to a patch of wildflowers? I wonder what they are?
sad but lovely ๐
glad you said that ๐
those are remains of the past i suppose ! who knows !!
Elegant. I admire your ability to say sso much with a few perfect words.
thank you so much for the kind words ๐
this is good.
Something i haven’t heard of before.
Thanks for sharing
Pleasure !! ๐
Sad. Feelings well expressed.
Time takes care, I suppose.
yes ! time takes care of all things !
Adore this one! Esp the pic ๐
me too .. this pic kinda inspired the post ๐
I don’t know but I would be more concerned about roads from my heart..I will know where do they lead to..and I would be able to return.. just a different opinion..
Anyways.. I loved both styles..
its the same roads that lead one in or out of the heart !!
Broken hurts so much! But the new road brings new vistas!
Only when one gets the courage to see new roads !!! thanks for the read and comments ๐
Good poem and challenging form. Thank you.
Thank you Sandy. Appreciate your comments.
thanks for pointing to Gogyohka. I hadn’t come across this form.
Luckily new inroads to the heard can appear at anytime, especially when least expected.
i am waiting for that unexpected moment ๐ thanks for the read !