cry of broken heart
beginning of a struggle
not to let tears flow
…
let the tears flow now
without struggling to stop
for new beginning
…
break your silent cries
give no beginning to tears
all life is struggle
Prompted at Haiku Heights and OSI
I’m touched. Keep on posting.
Radhika
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thanks for the encouraging words 🙂
well done.
🙂
Life can be a struggle! But struggling for a goal makes the winning so precious! Lovely thoughts!
right said !!
Lovely
thank you 🙂
Sometimes fighting tears isn’t worth the struggle. Give in and get rid of them, I say!
My Haiku Heights
i agree !! am totally on your side for that 🙂
u leave me in a predicament, Mermaid, so I’ll say all three are best.. I can’t chose a single one as being the best of the lot.. amazing combining of the two prompts! 🙂
This is a poem , you are not supposed to break it into 3 haikus 😛
What a great series of Haiku. Truly there is a time to cry and a time to struggle against the tears. Excellent.
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It’s a struggle for sure, but it has its moments…
Very beautiful..what thoughts.. Tears, Struggle, Beginning.. it’s all so connected.. you begin, you struggle you get tears.. and the sequence will change always…
Beautiful words and thank for sharing them, it reached me 😀
am glad for that 🙂
Hi Nimue;
sad thoughts these haiku are!
then let tears flow, and find a new beginning, for it is when we let go, we see some new hope!
very very well said Nimue!
yeah .. true that Amity !! am glad to see you here again 🙂
Though it is a sad poem I liked your style of expression. The way it looped and a series of Haikus werent they?
Lovely..TC
yes .. it was a haiku poem with repeating expressions 🙂 thank you for the visit !
The tears lead the way to change.
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/19/haiku-struggle-plus-belated-birthdays-awards/
three awards for you.
help us visit 4 friends who have been celebrating birthdays ..
oh, this is my prayer, for fall – thanks.
Beautiful 🙂
It is rather interesting for me to read that article. Thank author for it. I like such themes and anything connected to them. I definitely want to read a bit more soon. By the way, pretty good design this site has, but how about changing it from time to time?
Jenny Trider