out of illusions
silently i force myself
time to shed your wings;
***
into dreams i step
the new world of my liking
fire of my life;
***
your shy butterfly
evolved into the dragon
to burn your presence.
Prompted at Haiku heights
out of illusions
silently i force myself
time to shed your wings;
***
into dreams i step
the new world of my liking
fire of my life;
***
your shy butterfly
evolved into the dragon
to burn your presence.
Prompted at Haiku heights
all three are really lovely transformations Nimue.. three beautiful haikus on metamorphosis!
welcome to Haiku Heights 🙂 good to see u… and thanks for sharing with us! 🙂
thank you .. I assume you host this prompt too !! So a biiig thank you for the prompt blog 🙂
love them all!!
powerful!
thank you 🙂
Good ones…always wanted to try my hand on haiku. Lets see when I get hold of them! 🙂
sure do 🙂
Lovely haiku, every one.
😀
beautiful emotions.
well done!
😉
thanks !!
great! i thought i too have a poem by this title also haha!
will search 🙂
read ! it was really good 🙂
Ah Nimue love haikus and i saw your metamorphosis into a beautiful and sensual butterfly 🙂
x
and then the butterfly changed into a fiery dragon !!!
excellent transformations…i wonder does the dragons fire burn in a good way or bad…at the end of yourself, and all that. nice write. thanks for linking up to one shot again!
Its always a pleasure to link to One shot .. and more to read all the awesome poetry there 🙂
PS : this dragon lady burns in a bad way the ones who hurt her !!
Awesome Haiku’s…I’ll call you the queen of haiku’s….thanks so much for sharing xx
Oh thats too much to say dearie !!! love your blog btw 😀
Fantastic haikus….thank u for stopping by my blog:)
Pleasure 🙂
your shy butterfly evolved into the dragon..uhh – hope it burns not too hot..sometimes i prefer shy butterflies…
it wont hurt you .. my dragon hunts the hurting souls !!!
beautiful and vivid haikus. enjoyed reading them 🙂
thank you :))
They’re beautiful.
glad you said that !
Love the haiku stanzas and transformation at the end. thanks
thanks to you for the visit 🙂
well done.
smiles,
🙂
Any poem that includes a dragon gets an automatic “A” from me!
same with me 😀
you showed haiku in a great way…the link of three across a tremendous verse..well done
glad you liked the effort 🙂
Lovely…the metamorphosis was rather different from what I expected from the first stanza. I love the twist. Nice one.
Cheers.
am glad this came out well 🙂
This has real power in its short and punchy lines, Great post!
i am happy some one realized the power behind it 🙂
a good haiku writer can conveys so much with so little
I am impressed
glad you shared these with One Shot today
smiles from the Moon
thank you dear !! 🙂
Whoa– You breathe fire w/ this one! Nicely done!
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yay !!
These are wonderful, saying so much with so few words. I especially like
“your shy butterfly
evolved into the dragon
to burn your presence.”
Thank you for visiting my blog. I really appreciate it.
pleasure was all mine 🙂
Fantastic! Love, love, love this: “your shy butterfly / evolved into the dragon / to burn your presence.” Thank you for sharing these haiku! ♥
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