0 thoughts on “Beauty”

  1. wow. nice write…the beauty i give him rather then where i can lead him…are they in it for me or what i can do for them…a great question…nice one shot!

  2. three haikus of brilliance.. a very beautiful One Shot for sure 🙂
    and one of the best beauties I’ve read so far in Haiku Heights this week too!

    cheers Nimue, you’re on a beauty spree! 😉

  3. oooo I just want the speaker to take my hand and lead me into a world where I can learn….

    Love the sense of mystery

    thanks for sharing with One Shot

    Moon Smiles

  4. “one to feel not see” Beautiful image too. The poem is a great reminder of discovering beauty amid journey as opposed to thinking of it as a determined plot of of course.

  5. a great example of my favourite saying “less is more” you left me asking questions and the image took my eyes wandering up the path searching for answers..great write..cheers pete

  6. oh…this was simply beautiful!!!
    “one to feel not see” and “not the places i lead to” — WOW!!! Perfection!
    So much depth in those lines.. lovely!

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