“you always close your eyes” he laughed!
“what do you seek in my eyes” she asked
“myself”
“you are”
“i can’t see it when we kiss”
“Crazy!”
“i know”
“remember the first time we met”
“we were seven”
And together they laughed at the precious memory – the first,innocent kiss.
Love was their destiny.
Prompted @ Thursday Tales
Also submitted to Friday Flash 55
Cute Cute Cute………………………. This is so sweet to read.. You are a brilliant poet- the image couldn’t have been ant better…
Happy rally
xoxox
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thank you for the kind words !
Oh such a lovely photo and poem….a perfect match.
Sweet… loved the innocence playing…
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
At Twitter @VerseEveryDay – Sharing few lines about love, longing and life
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lovely story… love the adult dialogue that leads back to innocent first kiss
nice 55….loves first blush…at seven…nice…took me a bit longer to find mine…smiles. my 55 will be up in a bit…
don’t you feel left out Brian .. took me 22 years before i realized i found love .. and lost it too 🙂
super cute!
The presentation was so visually pleasing…the words enchanting!
Bravo!
Combining two memes…very cool Great 55.
My 55 is HERE .
Didn’t I read this earlier this week?
And didn’t I like it the first time I read it?
Well…I REALLY like it.
Excellent 55 My Friend
Romance wins again…
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Awww, how sweet!
If only love always came this easily for those who crave it.
Very nice. Thanks for doing Friday 55! 🙂
Mine’s been posted here since last night, but it’s taken me this long to visit and leave comments. Sorry about that.
oh…such a wonderful past to reminisce after all those years and when love finally has ripened or has bloomed into a mature love!
loved it, short and crisp!
just heaven 🙂
This was so sweet!!! I really liked the brevity of the lines. Short and sweet. Like candy.
This was a nice take on the prompt. :]
Nice! Liked the innocence! 🙂
i see what you did there
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