“Am trying”
Its all i kept telling
slowly, half heartedly,
to the point of yelling..
“I tried”
that was all i could say
assertively, matter-of-fact-ly
for failing yet again.
“I promise to try hard”
I made it my motto lots time
but you never did believe me
that made it no easy in my life.
“Am trying”
Its all i can say right now
At least i accept the need to change
i just need to figure how.
Prompted @ One Single Impression
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Try hard i do to escape the past ~ to build for myself a new start
is it possible
to erase what i want ~ to have nothing for flashback ?
Prompted @ Sunday Scribblings
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How well you’ve captured the feelings that we have when we attempt to please someone with our efforts.
its comes natural to us ! to try for the one we like …
Don’t ever stop trying!
you bet !! Am still at it 😉
Such struggles are a part of the human condition and you have illustrated that well here and with feeling. Good job!
i can has cheeseburger?
anything you want 😛
Fantastic! That hit me right in the sweet spot! I have been there! Thank you for sharing, this Sunday Scribblings thing has certainly introduced me to some wonderful writers!
You’ve vividly captured the emotions and feelings of trying. I like the story you’ve woven and lovely photo.
We can start from anywhere, and that is the perfect place.
It is so beautiful.. I make a fresh start every day.. yes! It is so very interesting and gives me lot of joy..
Emotions so well captured and put in poem.
Well done.
What a lovely and heartbreaking piece.