I never thought
the “new city”
would cease
to appear
so lonely
just ’cause
i knew
people like you,
real yet not
far yet close
guiding me to
places i like
any day i asked
any and every time.
Dedicated to Yogesh whom i met via twitter – my first friend and guide in the “new city”.
Written for Z to A challenge – N
Also submitted to Poetry Potluck
Very nice. New cities can be scarey–it’s good to find a friend and guide.
http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/11/15/leonnyes-z-to-a-challenge-n-is-for-noun/
New or old…cities can be lonely places when friendship is not there.
This made me recollect my experiences with a new city…
http://mangop.blogspot.com/2010/11/need.html
an experience of a new city can be made so wonderful if we have a friend like that..lovely…
here is mine
http://thehope-life.blogspot.com/2010/11/n-for-neglect.html
glad to know you found a friend to guide you. lovely, refreshing piece!
Bye For Now
thanks for the visit ๐
awww ๐ so sweet ๐
nice..
new place is always strange to be in,
Glad that help is up for you.
well expressed emotions,
lovely take,
Thanks for linking up with potluck.
A heartfelt poem – lovely. Like the quick repetition of ‘yet’.
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/15/i-need-him/
You are so lucky.. really..
a wonderful heartfelt dedication in words ๐
Slick write! Loved the flow.
Having friends guide you and share the city with you makes the experience fun.
great use of words, simple but full of meaning and emotion. nice job!
Coolness! (^_^) It’s always a blessing when you find someone that shows you the ropes of new surrounds…good for you.
Such a nice poem. It is truly scary to move to a new city. Nicely done.
Mine are here. Mine are here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/11/13/echo/ and http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/11/14/bleeding-pain/
A good friendship is worth its weight in gold.
Great one… How a person can change the perceptions of things, life and place so powerfully… and I agree to it too.
Thanks for sharing…
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Simple as a pleasant conversation. Enjoyed it.
AWw.. this is simply sweet, Nimue!! I felt like I were watching a movie… The scene just seemed to unfurl before my eyes…
Hope you are liking the New City!! ๐
Enjoy!