I never did tell

did i ever tell
how good even chaos was
when you were with me

*
when you were with me
i invited chaos to my life
to keep you away

*
to keep you away
i acted mean and helpless
did i ever tell

*
did i ever tell
i treated love like a sin
when you were with me

*
when you were with me
i sinned in love and lust
to keep you away

*
to keep you away
happenned undesired
did i ever tell !

 

 Dedicated to one of the best friend i had and whom i let go every other month,yet never really losing hope he might return.A haiku poetry to the one who hates haikus !

Submitted to Months of the year challenge – April (The month i met him few years back)

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0 thoughts on “I never did tell”

  1. marvelous..
    the haikus are superb..
    and the use of some lines again and again makes it even more awesome…

    “to keep you away
    happenned undesired
    did i ever tell !”
    This one’s my fav… 🙂

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  3. Aww… I sense a deep sense of longing there…
    Loved the style, Nimue…

    Stay away, stay near… it doesn’t matter as long as the hearts speak to each other…
    Happy New Year, lady!!

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