Songs we make


A line from you,
the next from me,
a word you forget,
and expect me to fill in

The spoon hits the mug
in a rhythm you devise
a tune plays on my lips
you approve it with smiles

I fill in more sounds
you stare at me shocked
suddenly fingers drum
nothing holding the flow.

A collective sigh escapes
our collaborative songs
linger  somewhere
in the dream we wove.




Prompted @ Magpie Tales

Submitted to Poetry Rally Week 37

Spread the love, spread the word ..

0 thoughts on “Songs we make”

  1. Synchronized minds, an orchestra of emotions. Two beings sub-merged in fluid chemistry.

    Beautiful piece.

    Yours sincerely,
    Philharmonic poet.

    Health and happiness to you and yours.

  2. 🙂 Songs we make… I could read myself between the lines even when I could never be able to describe it so well!

    Happy rally, I liked it a lot.

    Lu Ann.

  3. Dearest Lady Nimue, 🙂

    Thank you kindly for visiting my poetry blog! I am returning the favor by also visiting you here on your blog (for the purpose of strengthening the poetic/writing community as well!).

    I really enjoyed the rhythm of your poem. You brought on a good point in that there is music ALL AROUND us if we keep on listening, including the most mundane things in our lives. Thank you for writing this piece. 🙂

    Blessings to you,


  4. Aww.. how sweet is that!! Music can be born out of anything.. no? I think that’s the beauty of it…
    Loved the dreamy nature of your poem, Nimue… A lovely take on the Magpie!!

  5. How are you?

    Please keep in mind to:

    #1: return favor to poets who visited you
    #2: complete 18 comments to your peers…or fresh poets to explore..

    Thanks for the lovely contribution, it is fun when everyone gets the job done…
    Happy Tuesday!


  6. Hi, how are you?

    I am Blaga from Jingle Poetry :

    You are invited to join Monday Poetry Potluck Week 20, we are open Sunday 8pm, American Central Time, will remain open for 72 hours,

    if you fall short writing a theme related piece, feel free to share 1 to 3 old poems…Best Regards.

    Hope to see you in..sign in to follow our blog if you can!

    We value your support and would be more than happy to see you share…

    Best Wishes for your day.

    Week 20 Theme: Peace, Relaxation and Spirituality


Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *