Moods were blue,
blue not of the sky,
sky was of shade dark
dark like my sorrow,
sorrow took form of tears
tears that fell on heart,
heart’s door opened
open just to let memories
memories of you Inside.
Written for One Shot Wednesday
Moods were blue,
blue not of the sky,
sky was of shade dark
dark like my sorrow,
sorrow took form of tears
tears that fell on heart,
heart’s door opened
open just to let memories
memories of you Inside.
Written for One Shot Wednesday
Lovely !!!! And really touching
Beautiful melancholy words.
love the flow from line to line…a deep sorrow and the memories no balm, i am sure…
sad and sweet…love the photo too!
Both sad and sweet. Great picture, too. ๐
Found this to be a lovely poem with a sad tone.
I like loop poetry here, you did an awesome job ๐
How lovely to read your beautiful, poetic voice ~Jem
Lady Nimue…
Your sad words are hypnotic
loved the flow of emotions from one loop to another .. “sorrow took form of tears,tears that fell on heart” very deep lines
A deep portrayal of pain, pain of love lost.
Oh! I like the journey so much.. from mood to the sky to the feelings and the memories… so beautifully rounded up… I loved your image too…
So apt…
เฅ เคจเคฎเค เคถเคฟเคตเคพเคฏ
Om Namah Shivaya
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Touching… loved it..
I love how the lines flow from one to the next…bitter-sweet sentiments written beautifully.
Some serious words and heavy emotions Nimue!
Very nicely expressed the sadness..
Hugs xx
Nimuuuuu.. that was melancholic… but oh so sweet!! And the form was simply too good, my dear! I’m totally inspired!
Very very well written!
What a flight of fancy … so melancholy … so tender.