lap of loving winds,
sparkling waves touching my feet;
no debris feelings
Written for Haiku Challenge – 28 days 28 haiku
On sea shore
lap of loving winds,
sparkling waves touching my feet;
no debris feelings
Written for Haiku Challenge – 28 days 28 haiku
Very nice haiku.
Nimue, you managed to create a happy “debris” haiku. Amazing, and just in time. I was getting depressed. Thank you.
I dedicate this on to you then !!
Cheers 🙂
Just loved the way you have put together 🙂 well written
OMG! Whatever happened to the marine debris? Thank goodness that beach is just too good to be true. Interesting! And hope the world goes your Haiku way 🙂 Surely, there will be no place for ugly debris!
I actually had the idea of marine debris in mind..
but the pic was too serene to be used in that context ..
so the result .. am quite happy with this actually 😀
what a blessed feeling it must be!
trisha
http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/19/debris/
i can just imagine 😉
finally..a haiku that took todays prompt in a positive way. lovely work! 🙂
nice…love that last line…it says much…
So peaceful! I want to be there. There is a one-ness expressed … one-ness with the world, earth, wind, water, and the fire within are all present.
Shalom,
http://cloakedmonk.com/2011/02/19/children/
I could feel the serenity…an excellent haiku.
Nice image. I love walking on a beach.
I found myself saying the same thing as I read this and looked at the beautiful image: I want to be there! No wonder taking the sea air was thought to be healing 🙂
what a feeling it should be.. Loved this take..
Someone is Special
Love this … Perfectly brings back memories of walking on the beach.