Its one of your game again we play
the stupid games I never refuse
with a basket of fruits in between
we sit across each other in the bed
“this is all you get to eat tonight”
you smile with your eyes and take a bite
passing it to me,you search my face
“remember the rule,on every third bite
we lose a peice of what is currently worn”
“You cheater”,i scream and laugh
“you told me to come in layers of it”
while i nibble at the fruit,juice dripping
along my fingers,that you lick without wait.
“No one offerred you that”, I protest
“Its my game, my rules”,with a wink you say.
And so we peel the fruit and our self,
as we face each other with a new formed lust.
On the second fruit, or maybe it was third,
the basket forgotten, and so the distances
you eat from my hands or maybe its me
the sheets crumpled, fruit stains dried,
the night spent,tracing abyss of our desires.
Prompted @ March challenge (Day 11 – Fruit) , OSI (passionate)
I’ve learn one thing about visiting your site: your poems are never disappointing π
Great work!
ee… thanks :))
Much honored to have such kind words from you !
I have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award (..a bit late as I can see :))
http://eclipseofthemoon.wordpress.com/2011/03/14/versatile-blogger-award/
Better late than never π
I accept it with all my heart !
Thank you π
Indeed a passionate scene created with your words.
Nimue… this is awesome π
Nice use of words and scene creation… that’s it.. can’t go any further in elaboration π
@charlie , Prasad – I was not really sure if this came out well .. thanks π
Wonderful! Truly painted a scene.
Wow, Nimue! Beautifully depicted moment of passion. And then there’s the laundry! :0)
ah ! i don’t want to think of that right now π
Nimue, you work is always a work of passion. This is lovely.
Lovely poem! I am nominating you for the Versatile Blogger Award. I hope you consider accepting.
http://verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/2011/03/11/versatile-blogger-award/
Wow! This is fabulous!
I have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award.
I hope you consider accepting!
http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2011/03/11/versatile-blogger-award/
I love your stuff and I have nominated you for the versitile blogger award. http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/2011/03/11/the-versitile-blogger-award/
I hope you accept!
Appetites and desires sated in this poem
I like the progression π
thanks for the visit sweet friend
Hmmm, nice!
along my fingers,that you lick without wait.
βNo one offerred you thatβ, I protest… great, o
loved these words..!!
Funny, Lex is preaching on the fallacy of Eve taking the blame for the apple, when all Adam could do was say, “She told me to.” This is a sexy, fun poem, passionate and filled with lusty imagery. And to think I’ll probably sit through a church meeting tomorrow, conjuring moments from this poem! At least Lex will have a fun Saturday night…!
reminded me of the paintings where lovers are eating fruits from each other’s hands. sensuous poem.
trisha
http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/03/09/fruits/
loved this poem, those fruits are very much lingering in my mind now .. sensual,tender,expressive and the visuals are amazing .. .. Bon appetite..
Great passion in this. Excellent.
I like the flow of your poem, very expressive
Scene so well rendered!
Wow quite the game. Thanks for sharing.
sexy nimue… π π wow i felt completely enchanted in the scene you created π π well done darling….
Beautifully written. Almost like a picture!
A great word-picture you provide. Very well done.
Please have a good new week.
daily athens
it is a wonderful game for two to play…
Very well done, the passion in your writing is quite evident.
Quite wonderful~
Oh- I loved this! Quite the passion~~~