The first thought i had when i read today’s March Challenge prompt was “I wish I had abundance of time to do everything I want to do” .. And then i checked Big Tent Poetry’s Prompt on science and i came up with this poem :
Today we will learn
to create some time;
enough to read ,
lot more to write.
Cut procrastination to nil
add free flow of passion,
mix it with some focus
the special kind that’s hard
and one which doesnt lose charm.
Keep your self in sunlight
and move yourself around
till fresh ideas simmer
and force themselves aloud.
Observe , notice and connect,
Read , ideate , read more and rest
stir it with a soft pencil
or your pet colored pen,
create time , create abundance of it
its all in your hands,not magic dear friend.
Awesome….
“Keep your self in sunlight
and move yourself around
till fresh ideas simmer
and force themselves aloud.”
Loved these lines….
Nice. I mean awesome, K…..ni
Time, that infinity circle rolling up and down the hills of complexity. It can be hard to capture it, just for a small moment to create upon. Good write hun.
Glad you liked it ! and its ture .. how much ever we want or talk, we can not capture time !
I too loved these lines:
‘Keep your self in sunlight
and move yourself around
till fresh ideas simmer
and force themselves aloud.’
Just love the premise of the poem.
So right your are, my friend! These words ring true.
“All in our hands…not magic”… couldn’t be more true.
If you can create a school to “Cut procrastination to nil,” my wife will pay any amount to get me enrolled. I love this poem.
Amen to all that. A splendid contribution to the Abundance challenge. The ability to focus energy and ideas is a most useful attribute in a poet.
Great take on the prompt … at times, not only do I wish I had more time, but more hands too! :-)Thank you, ~becca
I need to do this more in my life. Beautifully expressed.
we all need to !!!
You poem truth here.
“move ’till fresh ideas simmer” Nice!
Perfect and such a wise sentiment.
Preach it! I especially like this line: “Keep your self in sunlight”
Terrific write and excellent point. Live in The Now, totally aware, actively engaged, do what is necessary for your happiness, fulfillment, betterment!
Here’s mine:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/09/you-and-me-scientifically/
Wonderful use of time! I just enjoyed my time in your place 🙂
A great recipe for knowledge, that.
I live in NOW. Best way to do it…
dissolved
We must live in the now.
Well said.
awesome, I tried one as well from big tent poetry:
When Science Becomes Political
That’s my kind of science: creating time would be such a useful talent.
An original take on the prompt.
Mmm. I need some of this creativity & management. 🙂
Wonderful imagery!!
Observe , notice and connect,
Read , ideate , read more and rest
stir it with a soft pencil
Now that’s the idea
Sounds inviting!
I love the premise of this AND what you’ve done with it!