No breeze,to mould ego
into mellow bonds that tickle
family integrity.
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Prompted @ Sensational Haiku Wednesday [Integrity] , March Challenge [ Day 16 – Family] , 3WW
No breeze,to mould ego
into mellow bonds that tickle
family integrity.
Β
Prompted @ Sensational Haiku Wednesday [Integrity] , March Challenge [ Day 16 – Family] , 3WW
Ouch.
As said by great person Family that prays together stays together π .. lovely said …
This was clever – your choice of words and layout gave a distinct view of what family means for you..Jae
Quite often a difficult task. Excellently stated.
beautiful written
beautiful take LN- that hippo and tortoise family is true incident, in africa a baby hippo was washed away in flood, it was rescued and placed in a zoo, it instantly bonded with a huge tortoise π
gayle has posted their photo, i too have about a dozen pictures of the pair (from internet).
trisha
http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/03/09/family/
We all need fresh air, don’t we. Well done.
A though provoking piece, well written!
“that tickle family integrity,” I love that.
Loved this…hidden undercurrents in this one. Good example of the impact of a few words.
No, it’s definitely no breeze to do so. Nicely stated!
well penned,
family is special.
sensational
how so ?
Family ties; family bonds – Good!
Family chains – Bad!
A lovely string of words and sentiment. Bravo.
Yes, it is more than a breeze. You do much with so few words π
Nice insight.
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