once they begin coming out
it’s a wonder they ever stop;
memory tested to hurt best
and verbal prowess for effect
expansion of horizons happen
parents,relatives – all pulled in
the slandering goes on,non stop
the hurt mounts on,and so on
if silence follows,tears fill in the gap
broken bonds lie in sorrow’s lap –
Forgotten for a moment,
bruised for a lifetime.
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Prompted @ NaPoWriMo [ Day 13 – A fast (5 min) poem on something very fast]
You play with words beautifully π
Thanks for the read and the comment dear !
π what else I can comment….
I like the way you miss spaces between words to show the rush of emotion.
Brilliant last two lines of the poem…I liked the poem.
those lines are my pick too from this poem !
It’s a crazy world indeed.
And the one’s that love you most hurt you most.
A tough prompt, I think, but you handled it effectively.
funny they never realize they are capable of causing this hurt !
mmm…lots of emotion in this one…nice write on a heavy topic
Thanks Brian !
very beautiful. sometimes people don’t even realize of these abuses
no one does in a matter of rage ! And that’s what so harmful of letting your tongue loose ..
An emotional fast poem. I couldn’t have written that in a week!