Relief is going home
to fresh made breakfast
to sun set walks into dark
to sweets after the dinner
to know next weekend i will return…
~
Written for May Challenge by Ava [Day 14] , May2011 Int’l 5 lines poetry Month
Relief is going home
to fresh made breakfast
to sun set walks into dark
to sweets after the dinner
to know next weekend i will return…
~
Written for May Challenge by Ava [Day 14] , May2011 Int’l 5 lines poetry Month
So very sweet!
There is no place like home …
Ooooo yea!
Wish I lived close enough to go home each weekend. Been almost 3 years now.:-(
I, too, am always eager to go home no matter how much I enjoyed my trip. Lovely poem, thanks! hugs, pat
http://patcegan.wordpress.com/2011/05/14/relief/
This sounds just right!
Yeah, where the heart is. Great use of show not tell.
life is best and beautiful , when you got people around you , who love you & can care for you …
true that ! bless you those people in loads 🙂
two hundred percent agreement.