He was used to run from love and the person of attention since he could never make space for anyone except himself in his life. It takes a lot more than conviction to stand in front of some one and make promises that are supposed to last.
She never expected him to stay but neither to leave like this – without reason or time. she had hoped the pain will fade with passing time,she and her life will take turns looking at the positive side of the break up.
They were both right and as much wrong. Their rigidity with the ideologies kept them apart forever but never out of each other’s hearts.
It was not a happy end as you can imagine, and that specially made them proud of themselves.
like seasons around you,
let your mind differ from heart’s words
rest your obsessions
Prompted @ Creative Copy challenge and Haiku Heights
thought provoking verses.. i like rest from obsessions ~
Excellent advice in the haiku. Rest, indeed.
The pain and sometimes relief of ending a relationship is difficult … like how you combined your fiction and Haiku!! Nicely done ~~
Nicely written. I liked the story first and then the Haiku.
Melanie
a reflection of ones life.. Those thing that everyone wants but can never force into their life. It happens at its own pace though.
beautiful word flow…i like the story behind it aswell.
Loved the haiku.. resting obsession.
Nice, liked the “rest your obsessions” – a nice reminder.
a sad but true kinda write up..