Uncontrolled longing,
a minute more, some more words
no mystery.am addict
Prompted @ Haiku heights (Mystery) , November PAD # 6 (Addict)
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BROKEN
Behind the smiles,
Reality spins a different tale,
On-lookers wonder, while
Keen eyes smile with understanding,
Enough stories live within stories,
No matter how long you keep silent.
Prompted @ November PAD # 5 – For today’s prompt, write a broken poem. The poem can be specifically about something breaking or just include something (or someone for that matter) that’s broken. Get as creative as you want about interpreting what’s broken: cars, hearts, toys, spirits, codes, etc.
Also linked to We write Poems
The haiku is powerful.
so true, well put.
🙂
Wow this is very deep and powerful. Well done.
Melanie
that was brilliant!
powerful one,, am addict..:)
Oh, very well poemed – these broken links detectible only by those who care to see. Enough stories live within stories… – love it, so insightful.
It’s true. I live that. I suspect most of us do, to some degree. Well written.
Its always hard to leave the things you love 🙂
At least you admit there’s no mystery to your condition! 🙂
Sunflower Mystery