“Love is blind”,
so was said long ago,
“and lovers cannot see”
that drowned my hopes,
to ever be able to speak,
the silence smoldered
the fires,oblivious to my sky
trapped in a planet of dreams,
fleeting glances of you,
like ice to the my tired feet,
pierced holes of longing
in the soul already battered,
and eyes so devoid of sleep…
Prompted @ November PAD (day 21) , Carry on Tuesday , Sunday whirl
If a love disappear with no warnings , it takes a relationship in vain…
Such deep unrequited love expressed here…enjoyed your poem.
Loved it!
oblivion
glimpses like ice to the tired feet and holes in the soul…of i hope their eyes are opened for you…smiles..nice write…
such a tragedy that he or she never knew…nice one ~
A lot of pain in this one, Lady Nimue. Nicely penned.
this is my third reading – I feel you have read my thoughts – “my sky in a planet
of dreams” 000 & ‘my soul already battered, and my eyes so devoid of sleep”
wow WoW… TY
eyes devoid of sleep – I can def relate to that – beautiful poem.
I can really relate to this. A lovely piece
enjoyed this,
well done.
I love where the words took you. Thanks for your participation at the Whirl. The end is tight.