Tumbling into your arms,
restless emotions released,
with rapid falling tears
spasms of rare gratitude
hit me like pulsations
of your passion into me,
elements of my existence
fused into weightlessness
in a glass furnace,spacious
enough to hold your energy
till we get a grip on reality
laughing on the enigma of love
—
Prompted @ Wordle here , OSI , Sunday Scribbling
ooowwwwww,My, my, my! Oh My, Breathtaking!
Lovely and romantic, beautifully understated.
Lovely, passionate words.
Powerful and thought-provoking:)
xx
What a tender piece..beautifully succinct..Jae
Existence fused into weightlessness. Marvelous thought.
very romantic
A wonderful description of what seems to be happening in the image. I especially like the ending; that first blush of love often does bring laughter from the sheer delight of the emotions being felt.
This is wonderful…I felt breathless reading your beautiful lines…:)
Truly, our knight should make us breathless…:) Like this one!
Good One…
Very passionate words put so well!
Beautiful…
elemental pulsations
I love this poem … so romantic
Wow! this is so sweet romantic beautiful