“It has to be here”
“Then Why can I not find it”
“This is the road of riches?”
“Yep. More shops. Less people”
“I swear, the pic was taken here”
“Where exactly was he standing ?”
“Staring into a shop’s display”
“Gosh! that would be the toy shop”
“you and your pet! teddy lovers”
“Found him”
“Glad”
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Inspired by Indigo spider’s Sunday Picture Press
Linked to G-Man’s friday flash 55
a missing pet can give quite the scare for sure…glad he was found…nice use of dialogue…
Oooooh Yeah!
An actual Story…
Love Love Loved your 55 Lady Nimue
Loved the pic as well
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Always best to be found. Nice one.
Nice sharp dialogue. made a great change for a 55!
I have this tooo .. I got so many toys π whenever I go to a touristy place i have to buy somehting as a memory π
Reblogged this on takingsnaps.
So glad my photo inspired you….thanks to indigospider!! I have reblogged onto my site so hopefully more people can enjoy it…..thanks again.
You pull the reader in just as the picture pulls in the eye
So nice to meet you and read your lovely work
Dialogue is so hard. Nice story.
This was great! Amazing it is only 55 words, feels like a full story because you convey so much with just the dialogue. Nice.