and when you lie
In my arms,
I fear the most
not losing this charm,
but afraid to see
you alone and lost,
to unable to hear
your heart’s songs,
and I wonder how
will I learn to let go
how to be assured
you will find a way
to build yourself a home
—
Linked to G-Man’s 55 flash fiction
I guess we all wonder if those we love will find a home…one that lives on.
Beautiful poem! Awesome !!
Nimue, you utter the thoughts of every girls mind. Great lines here.
Lady Nimue….
What a great post…But sad.
I hope it’s Fiction.
Loved your 55
Nice to see you back.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
I think we all worry about things like this. Sad but true. Great 55!
Very sad, but very caring too.
This is exactly how I feel about my son, who graduates from high school next year.
very nice. sums up huge fears in a few simple words
It is the hardest thing to do… to let go!
with you in his heart he will find a way. always.
Letting go scares me, I refuse to think about it. This beautifully written verse just made me realize how much I really dread it.