Her Hopes

her smile gives away
the hopes she hides in eyes
his sun shine gone pale ..

He empties his heart in words and sets them free in winds ; knowing wellΒ  she stands on the roof top catching every sheet of paper that flies from his room. Each night she builds new hopes from them.


Written for Haiku Height Β (hope)

Also linked to G-Man’s friday flash 55


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0 thoughts on “Her Hopes”

  1. this is beautiful…i love the scene of him emptying it out and her on the roof catching to build hopes…could def see a piece of art, a painting or a vid done to that…

  2. Lady Nimue…
    You are always so positive snd full of hope.
    You are s treasure to us all.
    Loved your 55 My Friend
    Thanks for playing , and have a Kick Ass Week End

  3. I enjoyed your haiku. My favorite line is the second “the hopes she hides in eyes”. How many times have I tried to hide my hopes – just in case. πŸ™‚ Well done.

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