on the edge of life
she looks back at music played
the smile of spring
Prompted @ September Heights (day 5)
Inspired from the following music prompt given by Elizebth at Musical Notes Poetry prompt :
Autumn
on the edge of life
she looks back at music played
the smile of spring
Prompted @ September Heights (day 5)
Inspired from the following music prompt given by Elizebth at Musical Notes Poetry prompt :
Very nice I love the surprise use of sppring at the end in a haiku about autumn and memory. Very nice.
Some memories are a hope for times to be same again 🙂
Autumn is interconnected with reminiscence.
I like your unusual take of Autumn with Hope.
Am on a hope and smile diagnosis 😉
Ah! This is such a wonderful haiku. Love the way you have used music to connect Autumn with Spring.
lovely interconnection..beautiful
very nice.
Nostalgic!…Beautiful one!
This is lovely. I like poetry that looks at the seasons of someone's life.
A spring that makes us want to look past winter and forget it's arrival 🙂
Bravo, nimue!! 🙂
September Heights – Autumn
Very creative!
I like that backward look!
My Lady Autumn
am glad this worked 🙂
Interesting caption you gave 🙂
not forget winter , but make it warm with old seson's memories !
Seasons whirl past like the Music Box Dancer, then fade into memory. Wonderful photo, beautiful smile and verse. You captured a great deal with few words,
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/
You related the images too 🙂
I love what came to you from the song…wasn't it interesting with no lyrics to direct? I love these music prompts!
~Paula