A sea I am,
contained in his embrace,
rooted to the sandy shores,
where we meet,
like one sea to another,
wondering if we belong ?
This is a translation of hindi poetry by Ibeingme
A sea I am,
contained in his embrace,
rooted to the sandy shores,
where we meet,
like one sea to another,
wondering if we belong ?
This is a translation of hindi poetry by Ibeingme
The final question leaves one with a feeling of uncertainty…an interesting write to think about.
No idea how the original flows or reads, but this here is perfect – sweet, bitter, gentle and lovely.
Aren’t we all wondering “if we belong”? Happy November, Nim
And when the answer is reached , we reach love.
Such a beautiful poem, loved it.
glad ! 🙂
such a little gem of a poem, i can feel the mystery of opening to someone precious from within. very lovely.
oh you put it beautifully .. 🙂
That wonder seems to come to all, to bad there wasn’t some writing on the wall, but we just have to take the leap and hope it will keep.
the thing with one sea to another is how do you tell where one ends and another begins…smiles…
This is a very pretty poem.Really enjoyed it.
like one sea to another, wondering if we belong? that is stellar metaphor
Sweet poem!