Hold me tight,
Etch with your fingers
A verse of our love,
Real like the passionate kisses,
Tall like the moments without it.
… and I promise to read them
back to your skin,
as eagerly as
you would,
Illuminated
by the spark in
your eyes,a fire that
consumes me,every time
you even whisper my name.
—
Just a gorgeous verse of love filled with warmth.
This is beautiful!
I think you have a wondrful talent for poetry…were I younger and trying to find a soulmate, I would steal this and read it to her in the moon light…of course I would give you the credit…the next morning.
Very romantic and a soothing image. Nicely done. 🙂
Nimue, so nice to read you again. Romantic, luscious, and the illumination coming from the eye of the beloved… just gave me the warm fuzzies, especially because Lex and I renewed our marriage vows last night. Love, Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.com/2013/02/10/dive-right-in/
🙂
thanks Amy !!
this comes the night after me and my guy made a few vows for our life ahead , whenever and however we start one together 🙂
Beautiful !
Nice and warm… You write so well!!
This poem is certainly lit up with love, sensuous and mouthwatering..
Romantically supercharged; brava…
Oh, love!! It is glorious and you’ve captured the emotions so well!
Very romantic mood here!
Well penned.
Made me go all gooey! Delightful.
very romantic, beautifully written!