circles,
of pleasure and guilt,
of success and miss,
of tears and pain,
of releif and rains,
of high and low,
of bend or blow,
of hurt and heal
of touch and feel.
circles,
some we form,
some we hold,
some we hate to make,
some we can not break,
some trap us inside,
some push us outside,
some overlap,
some never can.
circles,
of life,
for life,
since life.
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Prompted @ OSI ,
Also linked to Open link night !
Been too long I wrote a poem I guess. This was so refreshing.
Made me think of Vigeland Park in Oslo:
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Made me think of so many things. ..circle of life, of being a wife…of highs and lows and everything else.so many incidents thoughts memories flashed through my mind π
Thought provoking.
Glad to meet you, LadyNimue.
I like the spinning of your post.
Life can, in fact it does, make us dizzy.
I like your poem!
def lots of circles and cycles in our life…some we want to keep and others we only wish we could break out of….
The circle of life is mysterious indeed! Intriguing verse, Nimue.
A circle is also the only shape that is complete in itself.. it has no edges.. it has grudges. And the beauty of it is that the circle brings me back to you π
It has no grudges.. I meant. A mistake that I would like you to circle and think about π
Grrr.. “not circle and think about” i meant.. There is some jinx here with this circle post.. i making so many typos
I love the thoughts you convey and inspire
glad you did write a poem
wow! This was small and beautiful piece of writing. said so much about life, in a few words. π