You and Me
were those circles
growing apart in a pond
till
I wished God to throw
in a leaf ,a flower or twig
that gently swam
from me to you
binding us again
in an embrace.
You and Me
were always meant
to be love, to be care
to hide in such words
and meet in between
somewhere.
You and Me
will always hold
these ripples at bay
or let them pass through
the hearts so entwined
by fate.
If ever I have to write a reply poetry , I choose some from Ibeingme‘s blog. Maybe ’cause he is my inspiration for all my words that convey love , I can never be more happy than to write my side of thoughts on each of his word. The poem that inspired above lines is :
You and Me
are those circles
after stones are thrown
On the surface of a pond.
When we grow bigger
We both grow further,
When stones fall deep in the water
and on the surface
where we are growing
tells the world
we were never there.
You and Me
Were never there.
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This is for OctPowriMo day 10 prompt to be inspired from another person’s poem.
A beautiful poem to start my day…also enjoyed the poem that inspired it.
I love the picture. Love the poem. I love you <3
Love you too darling ..
After all , each of these emotiins are your gift to me.
Birthday gift cut kar doon agar gift se itne hi Khus ho toh. 😛
Sochna bhi mat !! :p
Beautifully written. I also wrote about a love that wasn’t meant to be.
Sad but lovely. =)
A beautiful, but sad piece, delicately written.
This was so beautiful. You both are the writers reading whom always make me learn so much. And this was just perfect 🙂
Oh that’s good. Love that end.
woww..and what i enjoyed the most was love birds talking through comments 🙂 the poem was filled with beautiful imgery…in my head i was creating pictures
Beautiful and sad.
Splendid work my dear! You cannot imagine how encouraging it was to read this. I love the way you treat love in your poetry and I think it comes from the love you guys share. This is one of my favourite poems by you. <3
Fantastic imagery in this poem. Really felt your words…:)
Thank you so much !!
One of the best pieces I have read in recent times. I like the idea!! Both poems are equally good!!
*blush*
thanks Nave 🙂
Lovely write. “You and Me” one half of the other. Smiles.