Layers upon layers –
society’s judgements piled on her;
her dreams buried in the heart.
word by word, she forged her way
a burst of color, a tint of magic;
a butterfly set free on paper…
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Inspired by Six sentence Story (Burst) and BrewsNspew Cafe (Butterfly)
Beautiful.
“word by word, she forged her way”
How true the power, the catharsis, that comes with writing.
You said it perfect !
Thanks for the visit.
Glad to see you here at SSS.
What a lovely Six. I hope you will link up again.
I sure will.
Thanks for the visit and the kind words.
liked the line, ‘word by word, she forged her way’
… blacksmith shop and rainbow bridge all in one!
…cool
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Thank you for the kind words and the visit.
I am always jealous of poets. I wish I had that ability. This is good. So glad you joined us.
Glad for your kind words !
Thank you.
A lovely six ๐
thank you ๐
Whoa! What a powerful and beautiful expression of determination. Brilliant piece and brava! Thank you for joining the challenge. ๐
thank you ๐
this is precisely the thought I had in my mind.
Beautiful!
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How lovely! And I love the strength it invokes, the pen being stronger than the sword, perhaps?
It always is ๐
Beautiful!
Beautiful six!
I cannot imagine a writer among us who has not soared with the feeling you describe here at one point or another. So well captured.
You are so right. Thank you for the visit ๐